The two NPR recordings and transcripts that I listened
to and saw caught my attention just by the title. I heard catchy music and
sound bites in both of the recordings. And I knew that this is the kind of
material I would need to use in my own audio essay. What I liked about these
news bits was simple, they were entertaining. Both made me laugh at the
absurdity of actually purchasing all of the items in the “12 Days of Christmas”
song and that Canadians booed the fellow Canadian, Justin Beiber. Now the
stories by themselves are silly, but how the speaker’s managed to catch my
attention and keep me entertained was what I knew I wanted for my audio essay,
but since my subject doesn’t have a “ha-ha” atmosphere about it, I’m just going
to have to try much hard to not bore any readers. What I also noticed about
these pieces was that they did a short introduction and then got to the point. They
managed to be entertaining while informative and then signed off. I find it
very usual to come to this website and get ideas from the recordings and
transcripts. I know that these will be very helpful, when it comes down to
finishing up my own recording.
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I’m glad I came to this Wednesday’s workshop. Mr. L.
really helped me shape my transcript/audio into a better paper/recording. For
my audio essay I asked my two aunts and my dad, all fellow alumni, to answer
some questions. My first draft consisted
of me asking questions and my family members replying, but when we peer edited
in class, Mr. L. helped me with the analytical portion of my essay. He told me
what I could put in certain places and what I could take out. My first draft
was four pages long and I knew when I was listening to the recordings of my
family members that this was too long and that I was going to have to cut some
more. Mr. L. helped with that, he went section by section with me and how I could
improve my essay, with his help I’m sure that I will get a good grade because
he gave me very helpful and useful tips. I was that I came because it helped me
see what I needed to focus on while I was editing the transcripts and the
recordings.
NPR Audio Essays
http://www.npr.org/player/v2/mediaPlayer.html?action=1&t=1&islist=false&id=165896141&m=165896132
http://www.npr.org/player/v2/mediaPlayer.html?action=1&t=1&islist=false&id=165897395&m=165897453
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